I feel like a fraud as I would love to create work of this quality... I can't even find the models where I live which makes it hard to progress...... Anyway the image, wardrobe (cosplay) and location are perfect I feel the one thing that lets this down is the feet being out of frame. The rule of thumb in Photography if the feet are missing is to crop mid calf or mid thigh, I think with this image mid thigh would work better. Also the sword is out of frame. I should point out I cut off the feet in a few of my images due to the sensor not getting as much of the image as the view finder. I'd bet money that the feet were in the image when you took the shot.